Episode 1 - “Lawn Dance”

20 Responses to “Episode 1 - “Lawn Dance””


  1. 1 nap

    Truly bizarre. In an awesomely-zomfg-wtf kinda way. I love the illustrated thought/speech bubble moments.

  2. 2 Nate Hastings

    Totally not what I expected and somehow even awesomer because of it.

  3. 3 bill

    Like it. like the illustrated thought bubbles a ton.
    and I laughed like crazy in the beginning
    to be more critical:
    loved it at first and then almost turned it off when the joke got a little thin but then the ketchup bottle entered and it got better and then it felt almost too long and then it ended….
    Song was a good ‘ole UNH mini-dorm/camp kinda thing but don’t know if I could take episode after episode of it.
    will be tuning in for at least the next one.

  4. 4 Leslie Poston

    Having a bemused :wtf: moment, in a pleasantly surreal “Am I awake yet?” kind of way.

  5. 5 eric richard

    well, i must say. it kept me entertained throughout the whole thing. i like it

  6. 6 M.O.M.

    This is interesting and entertaining stuff. Phil’s musical commentary is great. I also really liked the thought/speech bubbles. It is wonderful to see the collaboration between all the different types of artists; actors, directors, visual artists, computer animators, musicians……. your creative insights have a way of getting so many different people involved in these amazing projects.

  7. 7 ecc1977

    The Clarks reaction to Odd Noggin Land: Chris (31), said “Awesome”; Stephanie (32), said “Bizarre”; and Kaylee (2), said “I want another one”.

    And if I’ve learned anything from being a husband and a father, it’s to always listen to the two year old.

  8. 8 Renee

    Lord! What will you come up with next! You are ridiculous.

  9. 9 meghan simone

    I’ve never seen anything like this before! Ditto to the above comments. I will most def tune in for the next episode!

  10. 10 Kit Von Harbs

    You people amuse me. Where can I get a head like that? Can I be a guest star at any point? I think I wrote a song like that while drunk with a bunch of aerobic instructors in college, but mine had different lyrics like, boys and beer and sex, etc…

    Well done. I knew the burger was BP but thought the ketchup was Danielle - haha! Fooled me. Also thought that fries was someone else. You are v. sneaky, John Herman. Mark my words … ‘you will go somewhere someday and do something. Great.’

  11. 11 Samantha Ramey

    I saw the link to this on facebook…i didnt know what i was getting myself into…it was like “wtf is this?” and “this is strangely awesome!” at the same time.
    haha can’t wait to see the next one!

  12. 12 tracy

    this is creepy! why are there talking food? it is just wrong!!!!!!!!!!!

  13. 13 Rick Broussard

    Note how the emotional tension has been established with the seething rivalry between Cheeseburger and Fries. The lovely and playful Ketchup is apparently in a committed relationship with Cheeseburger, though he has grown indifferent to her and is interested in other condiments. Fries, on the other hand, knows that no other condiment will do for him. But stay tuned. Expect exotic Mayonnaise to arrive soon from Europe and tell Fries how they “do it” on the Continent.

  14. 14 Tracy Fisher

    Cheeseburger’s Short-shorts are oddly enticing.

  15. 15 Nancy Armitage

    Loved it. send me more…

  16. 16 rambo

    Wow! I enjoyed the dual communication through the song and bubbles. The story line left me wanting more,, what is Fries going to do when he has no lawn to mow? How come Cheeseburger can’t get up and dance, was Fries so right thet burgerman is a BUM….So different and I am so ready for more!

  17. 17 Michael J. Carrasquillo

    Can’t seem to change the station…something keeps me watching….it’s addictive. Hmmm, I got it! Were you inspired by fast food and R. Kelly’s “Trapped in the Closet”?

    ::wink:: LOL

    Good Job! Odd but with a deeper story & some cliffhangers, you’ll have yourself a series!

  18. 18 Jamison Cook

    Found it interesting. Had no idea what it was going to be about before watching it, or during it for that matter. I liked it in general. Will definitely tune in for the next one.

  19. 19 Ande Noren

    Wow. Thought it was the oddest concept I’ve seen for a while, but it really worked. The music and story just happily move along together, and one or the other kept my interest at any given moment. The heads are *great*.

    I don’t know how you’re going to develop this, but I will be tuning in for your next episode.

  20. 20 sam

    lol is all you think about grass?

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